Ka rawe Kael. What an awesome first blog post! I'm so impressed that your poem is a haiku but it also rhymes! Amazing! Have you read some of the other poems in the Poetry Slam?
Hi Kael my name is Harrison from paroa school. I really like this because it rymes a lot which makes it a realy good poem. maybe next time you could add a little bit more. How long did it take you to make? From Harrison
Hi my name is Taj I am from paroa school. you could of speacked more lowder so I could here and adid more culer but you did good but next time do some of the ideas that are said.
Hi Keal, Lotte here. This poem is short and sweet I love how you've thought so much about the words-it really pays off. Have you seen the other poems if you haven't go check them out there as awesome as this one! Maybe next time you could add a little sentence down the bottom explaining your learning journey for this post.
Hi Kael, My name is Katelyn and I go to Paroa School. My teacher gave my class and I a link to peoples blog to look at poems people made. I choose yours because I like to go to the ocean and have the water touch my skin. I liked your peom because I like how you ryhmed. Maybe next time you can write a caption about what you enjoyed, what you found difficult and what you could do to make it BTB. Why did you choose to make a wave poem? Keep up the awesome work. From Katelyn
Ka rawe Kael. What an awesome first blog post! I'm so impressed that your poem is a haiku but it also rhymes! Amazing! Have you read some of the other poems in the Poetry Slam?
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DeleteHi Kael my name is Harrison from paroa school. I really like this because it rymes a lot which makes it a realy good poem. maybe next time you could add a little bit more. How long did it take you to make? From Harrison
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Taj I am from paroa school. you could of speacked more lowder so I could here and adid more culer but you did good but next time do some of the ideas that are said.
ReplyDeleteHi Keal, Lotte here. This poem is short and sweet I love how you've thought so much about the words-it really pays off. Have you seen the other poems if you haven't go check them out there as awesome as this one! Maybe next time you could add a little sentence down the bottom explaining your learning journey for this post.
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ReplyDeleteMy name is Katelyn and I go to Paroa School. My teacher gave my class and I a link to peoples blog to look at poems people made. I choose yours because I like to go to the ocean and have the water touch my skin. I liked your peom because I like how you ryhmed. Maybe next time you can write a caption about what you enjoyed, what you found difficult and what you could do to make it BTB. Why did you choose to make a wave poem?
Keep up the awesome work.
From Katelyn